tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post9208680604325536788..comments2023-02-27T09:12:51.953-05:00Comments on The (Next) Most Dangerous Game: Chapter 27 - The Great EscapeRyanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-8004501330139127022008-06-30T20:06:00.000-04:002008-06-30T20:06:00.000-04:00@ AHI meant that the Fools were protecting their o...@ AH<BR/><BR/>I meant that the Fools were protecting their own equipment, stacked behind them [at the back of the Machine Shop] earlier.<BR/><BR/>"Everybody inside" was meant to be a command, not a question.<BR/><BR/>Nope. Peace, Cowboy, and Rubble were outside the room defending it against being overrun by zeds until the very last moments.<BR/><BR/>The clear liquid was odorless, but also unidentified by the author. If anybody had checked, they would've found dusty, faded labels that were not up to code. No welding equipment found by the Fools, at least.Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-37254518251112313192008-06-29T11:51:00.000-04:002008-06-29T11:51:00.000-04:00Ha, I totally knew nothing would happen when you s...Ha, I totally knew nothing would happen when you shot the barrel. I'm glad you wrote that in. Keep up the great writing - I'm really enjoying it so far!Ericahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15858848198641688772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-23949205795844282932008-06-27T14:08:00.000-04:002008-06-27T14:08:00.000-04:00In a manner of seconds, close to twenty zombies wp...In a <B>manner</B> of seconds, close to twenty zombies w<BR/>protecting the equipment behind them. - why are we protecting it? I'm okay with a little ruined equipment.<BR/>Cowboy swung his baseball bat <B>horizontal</B> with full force and crumpled a zed skull like an aluminum can. - it does sound cool, like a title "The Baseball Bat Horizontal"<BR/>"Everybody inside," Angel Hair said, standing proudly beside the heavy metal manhole-style covering.- it was not initially clear that this was a question. It's is grammatically acceptable to change that comma to a question mark.<BR/> he yelled to the trio of Fools <B>outside the room</B>. - I thought everyone was in<BR/><BR/>What was the clear liquid? Smells like....<BR/>There wasn't any welding equipment, was there? That would have been convenient.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-43858785197751132942008-06-27T07:14:00.000-04:002008-06-27T07:14:00.000-04:00! The tunnels! I never would have guessed.It might...! The tunnels! I never would have guessed.<BR/><BR/>It might be worth sticking a sentence in there to describe the tunnel system to anyone not super-familiar with Purdue. Unless you want it vague. :)luckeyfroghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09338266098096236978noreply@blogger.com