tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post5099500243075071717..comments2023-02-27T09:12:51.953-05:00Comments on The (Next) Most Dangerous Game: Chapter 32 - FractureRyanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-36577731009304536992008-11-11T03:24:00.000-05:002008-11-11T03:24:00.000-05:00@ DrewThe *bang* was simply the noise of three sim...@ Drew<BR/><BR/>The *bang* was simply the noise of three simultaneous zed arms smacking a large pane of glass.<BR/><BR/>@ AH<BR/><BR/>Thank you, I was very proud of that sentence.Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-47728019700588624692008-11-08T18:26:00.000-05:002008-11-08T18:26:00.000-05:00“They were a soccer field's length from the treeli...“They were a soccer field's length from the treeline when Angel Hair's ankle gave out.” – clearly a touch of fiction…nice<BR/><BR/>“A trio of zombies pressed themselves against the glass trying to get to the Fools, dragging their fingers against the glass with such force that their decaying skin began to slough off” - hell of an image ryan<BR/><BR/>I'm useless for a post at least...I don't know if I can take itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-33871359133776508912008-11-05T16:46:00.000-05:002008-11-05T16:46:00.000-05:00So did that "bang" come from one of us or were the...So did that "bang" come from one of us or were there snipers in the Hillenbrand?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18106352374733393145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-82811155282018289712008-11-02T13:58:00.000-05:002008-11-02T13:58:00.000-05:00That's just how Paul perceives people to be alive ...That's just how Paul perceives people to be alive or dead. Take his mother for another example.<BR/><BR/>-JaimeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-7333409785531014952008-10-30T00:30:00.000-04:002008-10-30T00:30:00.000-04:00@ScoreYou think it's funny...because Peace is unco...@Score<BR/><BR/>You think it's funny...because Peace is uncoordinated? Haha.<BR/><BR/>Also, thank you *very* much for that compliment. I was actually worried that I'd atrophied somewhat, and was hoping somebody would enjoy the descriptions in this chapter.<BR/><BR/>@Cowboy<BR/><BR/>Thank you, thank you. I aim to please. As for the solo mission...in real life I don't know that I would automatically try to go it alone? This is pretty much a story decision.<BR/><BR/>Also, you're damn right I'm the main character. :D I'll keep you posted!<BR/><BR/>@Paul<BR/><BR/>I'm confused. Did we have reason to believe that I wasn't alive? Or was that a thinly veiled crack at my lengthy time between posts?Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-86687692978023937432008-10-29T20:01:00.000-04:002008-10-29T20:01:00.000-04:00So Ryan *is* still alive! Unless the zeds get him...So Ryan *is* still alive! Unless the zeds get him in Hillenbrand.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-10217566727226434002008-10-29T09:56:00.000-04:002008-10-29T09:56:00.000-04:00As always, amazing Not sure if I like the idea of ...As always, <B>amazing</B> Not sure if I like the idea of you going in there rogue...but then again, what am I to expect...you <I> are </I> the main character after all!<BR/><BR/>keep up the good work, and text me on the next one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224977459467038617.post-21690125798737863532008-10-29T01:34:00.000-04:002008-10-29T01:34:00.000-04:00"Like a well-oiled machine, Peace grabbed the erra..."Like a well-oiled machine, Peace grabbed the errant pool cue and did a quick spin, checking for threats."<BR/><BR/>I chortled with the vision in my head of Peace spinning, like a 360 in one jump or something.<BR/><BR/>It's nice to see your writing hasn't waned at all since the last entry. Some descriptions felt very nice.<BR/><BR/>~ScottScoreSetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00689901402139010291noreply@blogger.com